IndexAbstractLiterature ReviewConclusionsIn this article there is information about the name of the journal which is Academic Research International. There is a volume number mentioned which is 2, also the issue number but not mentioned the page range, in the journal it is okay if there is no page number because the volume and issue number are there. In academic writing it is essential to mention all these things in your study or article. Author Name and Date: Author names are Asif Jamil and Malik Amer Atta who write this article and exact publication date is not mentioned but month and year are available which was May 2012. So both are mentioned things. Most things are mentioned but some are not present. There is a specific representation of the article according to the rules of academic writing, there is a proper format to write all the things like author name, article title, journal name, volume number, issue number, page range and DOI etc., as some things need to be in italics like volume no. undone thing missing from this article or not following the rules of academic writing. Say no to plagiarism. Get a tailor-made essay on "Why Violent Video Games Shouldn't Be Banned"? Get an original essayAbstractThe abstract of this article provides a clear overview of the study, what this study will be, and what happened in the study. In the abstract there is a sample size of the study, mentioned the methodology and what methods or techniques were used during this study to gain information about it. He also mentioned the findings or results from which they get it. But there was no mention of the research problem, that is, why this study was conducted or what its purpose is. Research problem which is an important thing of the study, why is it necessary to conduct this study, what is the purpose of the study, so it is considered as an essential thing of the research or any study. Also, do not provide the recommendation in the abstract which is also the abstract component. So these two things are missing in the abstract. Introduction The introduction of an article is an important thing, the reason is that it gives an overview of the study or what you will say in your article or essay. It sets the stage or introduces your topic to the reader. The strong point of the introduction of this study is that the authors have clearly mentioned the significance of the study. Also, the purpose or objective has been clearly mentioned in the introductory part to know what is the role of parents' motivation or influence in the student's study. They form the basis for the reader to understand what he wants to say and they also provide an overview of the study, which is good. There is also the hypothesis of the study that there is a significant role of parental involvement and motivation on academic performance or otherwise. . For this they use H0 or H1. Now, there are some weaknesses in the introduction of the study, so the problem of this research and the reason for conducting this study is not clearly mentioned. Secondly, there is no definition of key terms such as what is meant by motivation, what is meant by educational level and parental influence, etc. They do not talk about their research project or how they conduct this study. Is this a qualitative or quantitative research, nothing was mentioned about it. According to this study, it is practically important for parents to participate in their children's education and motivate them to receive proper education. But in our country, most of us are not interested in educating our children, the reasonit's that they aren't as educated and believe in making money off of them. Literature Review There is a literature review in which the author has mentioned the work of other authors on similar topics on what their studies are about and what results they get from it. Then you compare them with yours. In this article, all sources cited are relevant to this study. Everything works soare mentioned in it are relevant to the study. The author does not provide any references that are not related to this study and this is the strength of the article. The review is somewhere between broad or narrow, the review is about the facts through which you can achieve your academic achievement and achieve progress, explain almost every point through which a student achieves success at the secondary level. They also pointed out foundational works related to their work that also strengthen the article. The review is more conceptual than theoretical, the reason is that there is no theory based on this topic, also it is a conceptual thing that if a parent participates in his/her child's study, it is obvious that he/she will get good grades. The references given in this document are neither too recent nor too old, ranging from the 1990s to 2003, so it is considered recent but again not too recent. The results of other studies have been that students achieve their education and make progress in it thanks to many factors, for example parents take a look at their children's education or other activities, teachers are also responsible for it and they give motivation to their students and offer more intrinsic activities, The climate of the school or classroom is also important and there is also a balance between curricular and co-curricular activities. This study concerns the fact that parents' contribution and motivation have a positive effect on students' education at the secondary level, which is an important stage of education. This study is quantitative and original in nature because data is collected by distributing questionnaires in different schools and information is obtained from it. . In the methodology there is population and sample size is also stated which is a worthy aspect of the article. Questionnaires are the instruments and they are valid, developed and reliable, so in this way a pilot study was conducted. The variables are students and parents, this study simply calculates the correlation between the variables evaluated in relation between parental participation, motivation and academic results. The procedure is not presented in enough detail, things are missing, any problems faced in the field, how they organized the questionnaire, how they made their instrument reliable and valid, etc. All these things are mentioned in the procedure so that the reader can I know that you are doing this research. The data is quantitative because the instrument used in this research is the questionnaire and the analysis of this type of data is performed by SPS. The researcher identified a correlation between motivation and parental involvement. The results of this work support the hypothesis and purpose of conducting this study. Discussion There is no discussion section of its own in the article, but yes, the findings of the study are related to the purpose or objectives, which is a strong point of the article. The results are here but there is no mention of its implications and they are also not linked to the review or other relevant studies, which is a weakness. The author is believed to connect his findings or results with other works or studies. It also includes the author's interpretation of the results, in other words the authors explain the result or findings of the study with their own wording. THE.